Very good! Very bold typeface, and the scratches are well placed and look natural. The only thing that makes this piece a little lower in quality is the grammatical errors. The piece reads "Is not how it starts is how its ends" when it should read "It's not how it starts it's how it ends". The way you've written it is kindof confusing. Just some advice!
Nice! I love the typeface. I don't like the red filled closed counters, because I think the whole piece would have looked a bit more eye pleasing with a thin line in the color of the background around each f the the closed counters. Nevertheless, I like the red dots at the ned, because they connect visually with the closed counters.